We are proud
to offer a professional, top-notch editing service for law school personal
statements. Our editors are all Ivy League graduates with extensive experience
in our respective fields. We have served on admissions committees and
have a firm grasp of the caliber of writing that is expected at top US
provide the following services:
will evaluate your essay's content. We will ensure that your statement:
the question in a direct and persuasive manner
b. Gives the reader an informed view of your achievements
c. Emphasizes the attributes that law schools value
d. Flows in a natural style that is easy to read
2. We will provide your essay with a compelling and memorable voice.
Admissions officers frequently read more than 50 personal statements
per day, many of which sound exactly alike. With more than 100 qualified
candidates for every seat in the class, you must capture their attention
from the very first word you write. Your statement must be a memorable
narrative with vivid language and a strong voice. We will ensure that
your introduction immediately engages the reader and provides a good first
impression. We will also ensure that your content provides details of
your life that are not presented elsewhere in your application. Finally,
we will edit your conclusion to ensure that you close the essay on a positive
3. We will capture the optimal tone for the essay. Great editing
strengthens your voice and presents the best possible aspects of your
personality. Our editors will enhance your natural writing style to reflect
the confidence and charisma of a successful Ivy League applicant. We will
ensure that your tone is positive without being boastful (and that you
are perceived as confident, rather than arrogant).
4. We will improve the essay's structure, flow, and readability.
Great essays are flawless and on topic. To achieve this standard, we will
restructure awkward sentences and omit any unnecessary words, phrases,
sentences, or paragraphs. We will also ensure that your essay is cohesive
and leads the reader to a strong conclusion. To improve the flow of your
writing, we will vary your sentence structure and insert appropriate transitions.
We will also verify that your paragraphs signal natural breaks in your
thought process and that each is cohesive in its own right. Finally, we
will clarify your main points and ensure that you present adequate supporting
5. We will fix all grammatical and mechanical mistakes.
We will correct all grammatical errors, spelling mistakes, run-on sentences,
and fragments. We will also correct word choice errors and catch subtle
mistakes, such as the improper use of prepositions and pronouns.
6. We will coordinate multiple essays. Some programs require applicants
to write several essays on a variety of topics. We will ensure that each
essay presents a different (but consistent) image of your personality
and strengths. A well-coordinated essay set has a synergistic effect on
the admissions committee: it provides a 360-degree view of the candidate
on both a professional and personal basis.
7. We will compare your statement to those of other candidates.
Along with our editing services, we will also provide our critical perspective
of your essay and compare it to others that we have evaluated. If needed,
we will suggest ways that you can improve the essays overall effectiveness.
Our goal is to make you stand out from the crowd and pass that all-important
the process, please send your personal statement to us in Word format
(preferably as an email attachment).
In the body
of the email message, please provide the following information:
1. the program
you are applying to (in this case, law school)
2. the exact question that was asked (feel free to copy it directly from
the school's website)
3. the length limit (if any)
4. any restrictions regarding type size or line spacing
5. concepts and ideas that you want emphasize in the statement
6. time constraints
7. any other information that you consider relevant
all material to IvyAssistance@mail.com
receive your material, we will send you a payment link where you can order
our service. Once we receive your order, we will complete our revision
of your statement within 48 hours. As a courtesy, we will also provide
a second review of the same work at no additional charge (if needed).
We want you to be completely satisfied with what you send to the schools.
$125 to edit a 750-word essay and $25 for each additional
Please email us at IvyAssistance@mail.com to begin the editing